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i won't admit i'm in love

i can't be in love
i swore never again
never would i let a guy in
to let someone so close

i swore the last time was it
i thought i had learned my lesson
i'm not admitting i'm in love
no way can i be in love

every time i fall harder and deeper
i've been hurt to many times
no i'm not gonna say i'm in love
it'll just fall apart as always

the walls are not coming down
not this time just to be hurt
i won't say i'm in love
because i can not be in love again

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  • ShadowSoul
    December 22, 2007
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    The repitition here is well used, getting the message across, well written, very emotional..