your on my mind again today
your eyes and facial features
on my mind are you
makeing me dream about you
hard to concentrate with you on my mind
sitting all alone in silence
you creep into my mind
creep in and over run my thoughts
i shake my head to clear my mind
on my mind are memories
memories of us togeather
things that remind me of pain
pain of losing you
you were taken so suddenly
like it was so unfair
wunfair because it was not your time
Please tell me what you think
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Thats sad hun, well written apart from a few minor spelling errors, great imagery and flow
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oh my what a terrible thing and thought hurts just to see those words on paper so 2 speak, I know this feeling all too well. use the good times to help releive the pain
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