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A, B, C’s of poetry

 

 

 

The alphabet

is falling

precariously

from my head

 

            ~ rearranged into poetry

 

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Prompt: Falling

In a list

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  • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
    February 9, 2008

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    This so deserved the gold you won for it . One perfect thought captured and penned out so brilliantly


    Cindy


  • MJ Donnelly gold member
    January 12, 2008
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    Two words: terse brilliance!


  • michael thomas
    December 26, 2007
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    very nice poem, short and beautiful. congratulations.


  • Naridill gold member
    December 26, 2007

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    Very beautiful - simple and sufficent. A very unique take grasped beautifully.

    Thanks for entering.
    Much luck.


  • Layne
    December 24, 2007
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    This was amazing, perfectly put. Falling into poetry, I can picture it!!!!!!!!

  • tara wilson gold member
    December 23, 2007
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    succinct poetry...so true.lovely!..


  • Nicolette gold member
    December 23, 2007

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    Oh this is great poetry! And how well you rearrange the letters - great work - loved this one!!

    ~ Nicolette


  • mysticstorm gold member
    December 22, 2007

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    LOL...this is perfect, what better way to fall, than into words to form poetry, excellent work.
    Very well done and creative.
    Best to you!


  • StarEyes
    December 22, 2007

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    Never thought about it, but you know, you have something there! I like this one alot!

    Sorry it has been a while since I stopped by.... been a bit on the busy side! LOL. what with novels, a screenplay and other things i am working on.....

    Best of luck in this contest!

    and love

    Nyetta

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