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[ I see, ]

I see,
I hear,
But not with eyes,
nor with ears.

I am aware,
of nothing,
nothing at all,
except my own mind.

My mind,
a small place,
a blank place,
where nothing moves.

I see something,
in my mind,
something that should,
not be there.

I try to run,
run away,
from this mind,
trying to take over mine.

A contest entry

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  • Danneh
    December 22, 2007

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    Hmm.. Interesting.. A very nice beginning and ending.. Keep on writing and good luck in the contest.

    -Danneh<3