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Saving Embrace

Falling from grace
like an angel
who lost
her wings
landing in
your saving embrace.

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Prompt- Falling

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  • storiesuntold gold member
    December 29, 2007

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    Beautiful

    Oh yes the angels we catch and save along the lifespan of our life we very seldom see yet it happens every day between all of us. How are you doing tonight be strong and think of it as something that stinks and it will help with the smoking


  • CherryOnTop
    December 26, 2007
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    This is so beautiful and graceful.


  • Naridill gold member
    December 26, 2007

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    A little wasted space, I feel - from the prompt - you explained too much within this. The ending itself would have casted the same imagery with less complexity.

    Thanks for entering.
    Much luck.


  • quack silver member
    December 23, 2007
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    really good mum

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    December 22, 2007

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    Oh I like this you ahve done a nice job with this indeed goodluck in the contest best wishes and much love


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    December 22, 2007

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    this is such a beautiful take on the prompt and really captures it. well done sissy and best of luck in the contest

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