Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Stardust Lover

Will you be my Stardust Lover?
Will you hold me in your arms?
Will you love me like none other?
Will you keep me out of harm?

Can I stay with you forever?
Until eternity expires?
Can I pull you close and ever
tend to all of your desires?

May I taste perfections lips?
Give you all your heart can take?
Drink of life in tiny sips,
And kiss you every time I wake?

Will you be my one and only?
Would you be my heart and soul?
I'll never be sad and lonely,
If you're there to make me whole!

Do you know the gift you're giving?
Do you see the things you've done?
You make my life feel it's worth living,
Without you it's no longer fun.

When I slip beneath the cover,
Can I dream of you at night?
For if you'll be my Stardust Lover,
I will always treat you right!

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • captain howdy
    January 17, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    ooh! This one gave me a chill. It is melodic and sweet. I love it. I think it might be my favorite one that you've done yet!


  • PerfectImperfection
    December 27, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    AWW! This is such a very sweet piece penned of adoration, a certain desire to always BE. Well spoken thoughts, a sort of Q & A in rhetorical fashion - where the feeling speaks for itself. Well done!!!