The sun shines thick
On the cold grass
Still wet from a late night soak.
A family strolls through a park
In upper mid-class Sacto suburbia.
Babygap jeans and BMW smiles.
I count their pills:
Cialis,
Acyclovir, 240 Norco
From her plastic surgeon Dr. Lee.
A contest entry
- Smile? by Exodus.
525 points, ended January 18, 2008, 23 entries
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Are you laughing with me?
Comments
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This is a very curious take on the idea of the contest and to be honest I'm not entirely sure I fully understand it but I did enjoy reading your piece. Thank you.
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smile?
it makes me smile... and want to puke
and thank you
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Wow.. This really amuses me.. And sadly! It's probably true...
You must have done doing this ^^
-Danneh<3 ( Keep on writing)
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