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I Turn To You

When I can't bear to get out of bed,
and I have no strength to lift my head
When I feel so tired I can't get through,
That is when I turn to You.

You give me strength when I am weak,
You help me find the right words to speak,
You lift me up every time I fall
With You, Lord, I again stand tall.

When I am frustrated with my platoon,
And I can't stand the people in my room,
When I'm so angry I don't know what to do,
That is when I turn to You.

You give me strength when I am weak,
You help me find the right words to speak,
You lift me up every time I fall
With You, Lord, I again stand tall.

When I miss home more than I can bear,
And I reach for someone who is not there
When tears fall and I feel so blue,
That is when I turn to You.

You give me strength when I am weak,
You help me find the right words to speak,
You lift me up every time I fall
With You, Lord, I again stand tall.

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This was written during Army Basic Training

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  • reckless abandon
    December 31, 2008
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    The repitition in this works really well and I enjoyed the rhyming. Thanks for sharing!

  • deepheart
    March 9, 2008
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    Simple, elegant and permeating to the deep of the human soul.

    Out of life's hurts, we find God's glory.