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thinking about you

thinking about you
all my feelings for you
are trapped inside my heart

my own genie in an ancient lamp
buried under millions of pounds of sand
on a desert unknown to all but me
that can't be found on any map.

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Just bored and wrote this one night.

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  • mellymae777
    May 31

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    nice job. the write was short but equisit in its own right. its good i like the emotion but it left me wanting more. nice job.


  • stop a bullet
    May 31

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    its so short but there's so much emotion in it. i love the genie metaphor, very creative. the whole thing is just really touching. great write!


  • Moronic Plague
    May 31
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    Kewlio......i likie it XD