Delicate fingers typing upon sensitive keys
opening my heart to an elation expanding
my fettering chains of reality release
for this goddess is never demanding
Her knowledge of rhymed incantations
from ethereal clouds of happiness
flow in waves traversing the milestones
gifted beauty - her essence - my bliss
She builds me with wisdom and comfort
gazing at me all the while with a sexy grin
mesmerized consistently I fumble to court
the hand from which these fingers descend
Dedicated to StormGoddess
Author notes
Yep!
It's for you Beautiful!
In a list
A contest entry
- Honor to the Ladies by Grey Mouser.
550 points, ended December 29, 2007, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
May we all find our bliss!
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whoops forget
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nice fantasy
Beautiful and romantic. The images remind me of a couple of the things I have read while playing mmorg
but none the less powerful. Nice! keep up the good work.
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wow
now that' romantic
so beautifully worded
and such intense admiration
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Ah..what a tribute is here dully filled with the beauty of the poetic heart..also with the beauty of the beautiful nazrrator as well..so heartwarming verse is here revealing the scenario of the true personality of the poetess here..well done...
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Mhmm.. I agree with controled-by-demons, both of you are very lucky to have each other, and I, going with the colors of text on this page, am green with envy. (*insert laugh*) It's a beautiful poem. :]
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Delicate fingers typing upon sensitive keys
opening my heart to an elation expanding
my fettering chains of reality release
for this goddess is never demanding
wow she is lucky to have you and lucky that you can write so butifully about her. i love how this flows and how its so poetic. great job i love it
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Ahhh, a truely tantalyzing tribute to this Goddess of Storms. Unassuming and filling all with great hope and joy with her immpressive works. Thank you so very much for entering into the contest this wonderful honoring write.
Be well and be blessed,
Mouser -
Wow Sir, this is utterly beautiful. Such a wonderful piece you've written for a wonderful woman. I'm sure this has definitely captivated her heart. Best to you in the contest.
Hugs
Vickie
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Wow Sir, this is utterly beautiful. Such a wonderful piece you've written for a wonderful woman. I'm sure this has definitely captivated her heart. Best to you in the contest.
Hugs
Vickie
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This is beautiful! How can I not like it?
I don't know if I should say I am honored by your words or if I should just come plant a big
! Ok, how about both? I absolutely adore and treasure this. Thank you so much sweetie!!!
Storm
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Sweetly said...
She will be enchanted by your beautiful poem for her. 
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oh...beauty be thy name...
this is stunning! what an EXCELLENT dedication you have penned, sir!
your words almost match the beauty of your intended...
what wonderful language you have weaved into heart warming sentiment...
wow...your poem will paint a smile upon this fair maiden indeed...
swoon us women folk gently Tang...for we are fallen neath your spell...
Blessings! Tammy
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This is a beautiful dedication to the Lady Fair.
Your words were wonderful to read.
Riftkin
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