Oh my love
how I perform when you are close-at-hand
when you are not hairbreadth how I am inquisitive for you?
a hurricane in the ocean reminiscing me of you
a tornado at the bishop's palace reflecting me of you
a storm on the grins of yours recollecting me of my cravings
all they makes me unchained from my corporeal liabilities
easing me from the dilemmas of life
landing me elsewhere from the land of honesties
showing me such a matter-of-factness
which I can't prophesy with my substantial eyes
which is witnessed only by my inner eyes
God made these eyes
precisely when the matter of oneness is my honorarium
to eyewitness you as unclad
Oh my love...
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A contest entry
- Love Poems. by OurxBeginning.
300 points, ended February 12, 2008, 49 entries
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Alluring piece poet
This drew me in for the wanting in this poem is described beautifuly. It was a very powerful piece yet written in so much grace. A beautiful picture to go with this remarkable piece. Very talented as usual. You are a professor of poetry. Bravo once again. Much love I send to you.
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Thank you so much for honoring me by great words of praise..
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Very sensuous first three lines pulled me right in...I think they are my favorites in this poem, though, "God made these eyes...to witnes you as unclad", they're wonderfully tender lines there as well.. . Lovely title too. I like this whole piece! Peace, Rhonda
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I could really feel the longing in this. Very emotional, and I liked the picture that went with your piece, you described the emotions well.
Thank you for entering and good luck.
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wow
Powerful emotions and longing expressed in this lovely piece.
Well done.
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Excellent
God made these eyes
precisely when the matter of oneness is my honorarium
to eyewitness you as unclad
This is a great write, incorporating elements of earth water and air. The completeness of the idea is representative of the poet's mind, which is very clear about what it needs to represent. The images are stunning, and the verbal power makes the piece unique and appealing. The structure of the poem too compliments its theme. Congrats!
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