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I've been here before

Somehow this seems all too familiar.
This silence and solitude.
What happened this time,
Where did I go wrong.
It couldnt have been me
because I was blamed the last time.

Mistakes are what I learn from.
Its your turn.
It couldnt have been me.
Where did I go wrong this time.
This silence and solitude,
seems all too familiar.

You told me you wanted me.
You watched as our fingers
filled the empty spaces.
Recovering from the wounds of time.
Then how is it I fell so close to you...
again..
Only to have you watch me fall..
again...

What is this game?
Show me.
For I clearly don't know how to play.
For I clearly don't WANT to play.
Show me.
What is this game?

You play it so well.
Maybe it's another lesson i'll have to learn.
Just not today.
Because I do not want to play,
For I clearly don't know how.
This silence and solitude.
Somehow seems all too familiar.

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Boys...they can horrible things to a girls mind.

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  • Precious jewel
    February 6, 2008

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    wow... i can really relate to this... My ex was a lot like this...
    great write... i love it..

    *amber


  • Immortal Obscurity Greeters member
    December 31, 2007

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    I can completely relate, as I've been there before, but trust me, you'll find someone worth your time. All the best to you


  • GypsyEyes
    December 30, 2007

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    i so agree with you A.N.!!! it's so true!! amazing poem filled with much emotion! Good luck in the contest and have a happy new year!
    ~NineTailedFox


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    December 22, 2007
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    Because I do not want to play,
    For I clearly don't know how.
    This silence and solitude.
    Somehow seems all too familiar.

    This is what the truth of love is ..we all are facing this reality in our life..and you have portyred it so nicely..well done...