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one bullet

all it take is one bullet
one bullet to end the pain

one bullet to feel at peace

one bullet to ease

one bullet....

 

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  • Xxdeath-is-bilssxX
    January 19, 2008
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    ....love

    love it sounds sweet
    hope u don't mind me suggesting
    but
    u should rite a poem called "love constructed in a bullet"
    i would but i cant think of enything so im giveing that title to u
    do with it what u like
    and if u write a poem with that title drop me a line so i can hav a read


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    December 22, 2007

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    Welcome to AllPoetry

    G'Day mate ♥

    Very sad write. It is a shame to think such thoughts but they appear so beautiful when done poetically.

    Enjoy AllPoetry
    Stay safe
    ~Manda


  • he broke me
    December 22, 2007

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    i know you might not think its very good but i like it and i do think it is good... it tells the truth so wat more do u need?