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love kills

she watches him as he tries to hide the cuts

but inside he knows she sees them

he asks himself why do you care what she thinks

he soon realizes he loves her

but he knows she could never love him,

for she has a boyfriend already

 

he goes home, finds the razor he used  so many times before

he puts it to his throat and cuts

his parents find him later that day

lying on the floor

blood spilled all around him

they have a funeral

his grave reads

 

"here lies my heart for the girl i have loved

  will never be with me so that is why i did it."
 

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    December 22, 2007

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    Welcome to AllPoetry

    You have a strong pen for the dark genre.
    Well penned, sharp and to the point

    Enjoy AllPoetry
    Stay safe
    ~Manda


  • he broke me
    December 22, 2007
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    oh that is so sad i especially like your last two lines