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Home for Christmas

cold gentle drafts
carry small white notes,
reminding me that
his warmth
will be home
soon.

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  • brokenpoet
    January 7, 2008
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    Aww I really like this. It's very sweet and short.

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  • FransB gold member
    January 4, 2008

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    I enjoyed the way in which you contrast 'drafts' with 'warmth' - they characterise the he who 'will be home soon', as well as the mixture between excitement and longing. Well presented. Frans