First love is always the best memory
but is that all it is to me?
i have a tendency to hold on to the paast, and the people i once loved
he hlds a place special in my heart, but to him im just some girl.
i know he has moved on, and so have i
but i like to think
that maybe one day
he will be mine.
A contest entry
- * * * loving you forever ? * * * by The Hardest Goodbye.
450 points, ended December 28, 2007, 16 entries
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Comments
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yea, great poem you have here
i liked it very much! good luck in my contest.
xo
kandy -
very nice writing, very deep. i like it!
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This is such a beautiful piece.
It is as if you give the reader a glimpse into your heart.
Wonderful portrayal of emotion.
Excellent use of words.
Blessed be,
Catherine
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