he follows the wind
finding enticements hold
capturing him entirely
carrying special message
the scent of her
across great distance
till he holds her forever
Author notes
BLOWING WIND by pnina evental
Prompt is: When the wind blows...
finish it in 25 words or less
A contest entry
- Prompt Contest 10 entries/25 words or less by mysticstorm.
450 points, ended December 22, 2007, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - 100 poems, more points to come! by katie-jo.
900 points, ended January 18, 2008, 42 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Ah, this speaks to me in it's own way. A love the blows on distant breezes, hoping to be captured by the recipient. Nicely written piece, especially for one so short. Thank you for entering and good luck. Storm
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a strong and lovely little write here, it's a fair piece, perhaps should have woven an image or two into it to really spruce it up, but all in all it's sweet and subtle and the temperament is just right thanks for entering
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Absolutely breathtaking. This is an amazing poem, short and simple, but so precise and firm. Definitely a finalist.
"capturing him entirely
carrying special message"
My favorite lines of this poem, they are spectacular.
Thank you for entering and all the best in the judging.
Happy New Year! -
This si so beautiful and emotional...no deeper feelings than that of love...the wind can carry us anywhere in thought...if we just let it.
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This is a breath taking write. Such emotion flows with the stroke of your pen. It leaves one thinking of great beauty and love. Best of luck to you in the contest.
Dawn
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