In my comfortable silky gown,
I go walking in the woods.
He is with me,
Holding my hand.
We come upon a grove of trees.
There are beautiful flowers all around.
They smell wonderful,
And so we sit down to enjoy it.
The velvety pink flowers,
The exotice new smell,
And his hand in mine
All send my heart throbbing.
The sweet blossoms start to fall,
And we both pick one up.
We pluck the petals off,
One by one.
Each of us ends up
Loving the other,
And each of us ends up
Holding each other tightly.
The cherry blossoms keep falling,
And we begin walking.
The cherry trees seem to never end,
But that's ok because we're together.
As we go walking,
Walking through the cherry blossoms,
We keep our hands together,
And love eachother more.
Author notes
This is a different poem. i don't like it that much. but i liked the picture so i wanted to write a poem about it.
A contest entry
- Pic Inspired (VII) by ZachP.
300 points, ended January 3, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Chaotic Poetry by Melodies.
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Comments
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AHhhhhh So romantic and lovely. I am so impressed by this poem… made me really appreciate your talent. The imagery here is so fine! A poem that makes the reader think and admire. I love love poems.
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I love love poems too. i'm a total sucker for them! that's why I write so many! lol
Koko
thanks
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I like how you told the story. It was pretty good. I liked the picture you painted me.
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Wonderful
This is such a beautiful piece.
It is as if you give the reader a glimpse into your heart.
Wonderful portrayal of emotion.
Excellent use of words.
Blessed be,
Catherine
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