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Because of Effects

His warm breath in my in my air
As he screamed like a banshee
And they all ganged up just to beat me down
And tell me what was wrong even though I already knew

STOP!!
Just shut up and leave me alone
I screamed back to shut them up
but I wasn't able to fight fire with fire

And when it was over they had brought me so low
I felt as if I was sinking forever into
a sea of my faults,regrets,and things scarring
my mind and body forever

But then I began to laugh
It just amused me because I made
a small mistake and suffered great consequenses
But people will always break me down

And I dont do anything for anyone
if I dont get back up
So I forgave and forgot
and smiled.

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  • Exodus gold member
    January 17, 2008

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    This isn't what I originally intended by the contest. I don't mean a real smile, I mean a smile that you give when you know it's easier than answering questions. Make sense?
    Thank you anyway