as I stare from below
your tears fall into my eyes
stinging the eternal dryness
this bid I rest in
a bit to narrow for my liking
it's walls to high
the lid softly closes
my breathing slows
eventually nothing matters
everything is faded to a single hue
crimson
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I know it sucks
Please tell me what you think
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whatever, i didnt think it sucked. then again you should look at mine and what i think is good, but still loved the word choice and it just flowed. i liked it dont be so negative.
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