You will rise above the pain,
although under circumstances you can't explain,
The lord will shelter you through the rain.
When times get hard and you feel alone,
and the pain is more than you've ever known,
just remember you're not on your own.
At times the hurt is too much to bare,
but remember he'll always be there,
and you can always talk to him in prayer.
Don't let these bad times get you blue,
just know that you'll get through,
and the power he reigns will be in you.
A contest entry
- Pimp up my prewrites by leander.
650 points, ended February 21, 2008, 108 entries
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Comments
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This is good. It reminds me of the poem by an unknown author called Footprints. I like the spirituality in this.
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This is a very sprititual poem that you have written here, and though I'm not the religious person myself, reading a poem like this once in a while sure doesn't do me harm
The rhyme you've used is consistant and quite natural. Good on that!
Thanks for this entry as well!
Leander
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