Light and dark clash within me,
wars between vice and virtue rage on
the battleground of my heart -
right and wrong vie for supremacy -
my personal Armageddon.
Critique?
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impressive
really really good (lol, I sound like a broken record) but seriously, this is the best free verse one from you I've read so far. ^_^ -
hehehe so true! i love this!! short and to the point but deep at the same time.! good write
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Wow, this is pretty deep!
I am sure that we have all felt this way
at some point in our lives. It's really
an uncomfortable feeling that seems to
just take control over us. I love the
concept of this poem of yours. It's so
true to life and something that we all try
to avoid. Well done and thanks a lot for
sharing this one! Keep up the wonderful
work here my friend!
Jeremy0826
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