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Longing to Forget The Tears You've Made Me Cry

I saw your photo on my table
I read that letter, all to long ago sent
"hey darlin', it's beautiful here
I wish you could be here with me"
I thought about you today,
As I do every minute
Of every day...
I can't help how I feel
And I've tried to move on

After so long, I heard your voice
And I let the tears fall...

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  • ASleepingPoppy
    July 22, 2008
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    ahh i've so been there. good job and as much as this is said, i'm sorry

  • Dana rose
    April 10, 2008

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    i think that this is a very good poem and i think that you should write more like this and i rally like all of it so it is hard for me to pick a fav and i know what you mean with the poem


  • Brooklynn Tainted gold member
    April 10, 2008

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    I wish you could be here with me"
    I thought about you today,
    As I do every minute
    Of every day...
    I can't help how I feel
    And I've tried to move on

    beautiful but sad words. i really like this poem alot its really sad though.


  • Mr.Stratocaster
    April 10, 2008
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    Aww

    Very moving...


  • lady8
    December 21, 2007
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    The heart felt tear is felt in your words..Bitterlysweet with every emotion.

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