I misread the signs
Forgot to read between the lines
And now it seems I'm fleeing from you
But then again, you are too
So bitch, this one's for you
You lied to me,
Right to my face
About you great big fall from grace
Your acting skills
They gave me chills
So bitch, this one's for you
Author notes
4/7 deadly sins-wrath-option 2
A contest entry
- ~ SET the BAR ~ Anything Goes~ Possible of 5750 points handed out! by Florida Sunshine.
950 points, ended February 24, 2008, 182 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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expressive
Strong emotions, expressing them is what it's all about.
The message came across loud and clear. Poetry can be a means of therapy and a "safe" way to vent our emotions, including anger. -
I hope to never
upset you in my life time or yours either way. This was cute. i could use your lines when I get upset. But then I would not be much of an adult. it does tell one a thing or two and to the point...mac
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ive read this
you know what i think 
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Wow ~ the first two lines comes out STRONG and powerful and you carry it all the way through ~ I think its what everyone would say to anyone who's done them wrong~ in some way or the other ~ I think it would have the be a VERY small percentage of people who would never understand this type of passion and anger ~ and .... i'm taking control of how I feel ~ and i'm letting you know it ~ type thing~ HERE HERE~ to you for saying everything I've always wanted to
Thanks for entering the "Set the Bar" contest ~ good luck to you ~ Terrific job.
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damn that bitch lol
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I honestly didn't enjoy this. It was too short and slightly too immature for me to really get into. Sorry. Thanks for entering though and good luck in the other contests.
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Wow! This is such a deep write. I can feel the emotions springing out of the page. Thank you so much! Thanks for your entry, and good luck!
All the best,
*Stephi* *rose -
Judge Says
I really enjoyed this poem! it had a lot of great emotion! i've been through the samething. thank you for entering and good luck in my contest!
~Dommi -
thats very good i can really relate to it, it sounds like one of my friends which i insist on holding onto
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oops sry, 1 line short, ill get on that rite away
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Thank you for entering! This only had one error, you try and find it! It was really short, but I got the whole story there.
Good Luck!
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