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My Secret

I hate the mirror
And its ugly reflection
Every flaw,insecuruty,
And imperfection

Another calorie
Another mistake
Anotther lie
About my weight

Hating myself
For every pound
I'll feel better
When the numbers go down

When I started I didn't know
I'd keep going downward
I'd end up like this
I can't stop now
...I'm addicted

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Just one of my many "Bad Habbits".

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  • WOAHH! thats exactly like me!! =[

    "Another calorie
    Another mistake
    Anotther lie
    About my weight"

    best stanza...alot of people could probably relate to this..well done! great job! hope you recover =]


  • Bailey Girl
    July 22, 2008

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    OMG! I totally get this poem. I mean, I know exactly what it's like! It's an awesome write. I think it totally kind of sums up how bad self-image can get. It's amazing! I mean, it's totally, bloody awesome!


  • anawarfare
    April 7, 2008

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    This poem is wow! it totally fits me to the T! In ways i'm glad that someone is like me...I just wish people as you and I didn't have to go through this. Wonderful write!


  • ember-blair
    December 30, 2007

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    I know how you feel
    and you just want people to leave you alone about the situation
    but you need the control
    the beauty in being thin
    good luck
    and I do hope that one day you find yourself beautiful


  • dc4cutie
    December 21, 2007
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    awesome

    im going through this ^^ right now.
    this is so true.
    great job,
    its AWESOME


  • catherinevania
    December 21, 2007

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    trigger.
    it's a sad thing.
    so many people with eating disorders.
    i was obsessed with my weight a while back,
    its like being stuck in a world where,
    calories and shoving my finger down my throat, were my number one priorities...
    let me tell you something, the feeling of control, only lasts until things begin to spin out of control.
    i can relate to this.
    amazing poem.
    Blessed be,
    Catherine

    • basket-case-loser
      December 21, 2007
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      Nothing in my life is in conrol right now.Everyone thinks I have it all together,the truth is the exact oppisite.So thanks it means a lot to kow someone's like me.

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