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give me you

give me you
to hold
flesh naked and ready to explore roaming hands
white sheets like grapevines
lay about in a dark room
open windows view pale moons and stars, naked beauty so damn fine
on top of love
play me gently
whisper loudly i do
orgasmic songbird climax
all night i give
body tremble to deliver its offering
sweat from brown temples flow down warm breast
i love you woman
sweet jesus
come with me infinite beauty
release your love gently
let it be born
let me cry your pain
to rise in your arms like the dawns
braided into sweetness
this i'll do each day
make love to you
slowly

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i'm seeking to write a book on poerty, I could us the help of my poetic sisters and brothers

are the words to intricate...

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  • Seeking Peace silver member
    December 28, 2007
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    Welcome to AllPoetry

    I do love the way you have worded this piece, with just enough to entice the reader to read more... great job and goodluck with the book

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  • jnprkr
    December 21, 2007
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    solid

    real funky like the 1960s