Hair playing with the wind
Eyes watching the power of the nature
Enjoying the cold breath of mother earth
Watching her cry over the destruction
Breathing in poison made by men
A mind so wild and untamed
Never following the laws
Doing what it pleases
Not caring who she hurts on the way
Or so she thought
A ocean of feelings
Tearing down the walls she carefully build
Build to keep them locked up
To stay cold
One person
That was all it took
The walls turned into dust
The feelings took over
Eyes opening slowly
Watching the colors of the world
Watching the beauty of the ocean
Admiring mother earth
Crying together with her
Author notes
"It's not over till it's over.
Every ending's a new beginning.
One more chance to get it right.
One more chance to get it wrong.
It's not over till it's over.
Sometimes nowhere leads to somewhere,
And it all starts again in the end."
A contest entry
- Best Of The Best by Partners In Crime.
725 points, ended October 18, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is beautiful! I'm so glad you joined the group! Amazing! Good Luck
~Katie
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Wow...it shows me how strong you are, in life, in love..and in words...
Great,
XXJeannette
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Nicely Done
This is very nicely done. I like the overall concept of this piece. Well done and good luck in the contest.
Countrybabe
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Great write x
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Even when it seems the very end of everything there's always a promise and chance somewhere in between that helps to see things and go the path we're suppose to
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Good poem, it was a treat for me to read good luck in the contest
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Great write here, I like the turn that it takes on from the middle on. Best wishes in the contest
Dove
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This is a great piece Meroza, i think the ending made this poem fit together nicely. Good stuff
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A many faceted poem, Meroza, rather deep and very meaningful.
good job and I wish you luck in the contest
Dee
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This is a lovely poem, Thank you for entering and good luck in the contest ..
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This is a very pretty poem, I like the sincerity you express for Mother nature.
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this is beautiful thanks
good luck god bless
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Aww what a deeply emotional & heartfelt write.
Really reeled me in with your words of depth.
Thanks for sharing -
this is...
wow.
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One person
That was all it took
The walls turned into dust
The feelings took over
So beautiful.
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Thank you for your comment, I am glad you liked it
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wow, now that was a real piece. loved it thank you. and again a small spelling mistake .. "Admiering" should be "admiring" ... thank you so much for sharing. This is a wonderful poem. -elena
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Thank you for your comment Eleno and yet again many thanks for saiving my day ^^
- Merosa
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Eyes opening slowly
Watching the colors of the world
Watching the beauty of the ocean
Admiering mother earth
Crying together with her
This is an amazing poetry revealing the strength of the wonderful immagery..well done... -
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Thank you sir for your comment. All I write always comes from the bottom of my heart
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