Maybe one day i wont have to pretend that i don't miss you
Because maybe one day you will just be a faded memory
Maybe one day i wont flood in tears
those of which fell from my eyes
Maybe some day i can make it on my own
and maybe the pain will go away
Maybe some day i can love someoone new
and maybe he will treat me better than you
Maybe one day i can see you walking by
and i hope that i can maybe say that youve done good
A contest entry
- Smile? by Exodus.
525 points, ended January 18, 2008, 23 entries
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I don't think that the repetition worked as well as you wanted it to. Unfortunately it is one of those very delicate things that is incredibly easy to under or over do. This was an interesting view of the contest though. Thank you
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