What a pleasent surprise
Your hand with mine
Walking along this frozen street
The lights glimmering in the night sky
The stars in your eyes.
Just the two of us
In perfect unison through the snow
Voices ringing in the stillness of the night
Caroling our love for all to hear
What a wonderful life...
If only it were true.
A contest entry
- How did I get here by bluecollarlove.
1750 points, ended January 3, 2008, 5 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Nice dream
Something in your words speak of romance.Made me want to be there. -
Life is a dream, it is true only in realities. A very good write indeed..thank you for sharing the poem with me
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aww.
it was really sweet and i was all happy like yaay lauren!
aand then i was sad. -
Yes, a very wonderful life it would be; alas we are stuck with what we have...
definitely not enough.
Very well written poet. Bravo. -
Whoa. This is very good. The Suggestion thing under this says to point out my least favorite and my favorite parts but i like them all so i cant really do that =]. Well nice write =].
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