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Destroyed

Destroyed


Life tamed by destruction when the curtains fall

Shadows that cover a blood stained wall

Fueled by sorrow, taught by lust

Inside her broken heart lie the burns of mistrust

Anguished, face haunted, dark and ashen

Soul brutally scarred by a soul's sinful passion

A slight trace of fear depicted in her eye

Mourning fills the room, another lonely soul left to die

Innocently deceived in by the intoxicated thrill of danger

Abused and heart shattered, joy now and alienated stranger

Broken soul bleeding, another heart has been killed

The journey of a solitary life, now vanished and unfulfilled.

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    December 22, 2007
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    Abused and heart shattered, joy now and alienated stranger

    Broken soul bleeding, another heart has been killed

    The journey of a solitary life, now vanished and unfulfilled

    Yes you are refelcting the sad truth of life and I can feel the pain and see the tears in the every word of this poetry..well done..