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smiling,
looking up
at the stars

a shooting star
goes across the pitch black sky
she makes a wish

of coarse,
she makes the same wish
every time

knowing, 
it will probably never
come true

but still
...
you never know

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well... idk about this poem...

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  • grace elizabeth
    January 24, 2008

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    i like it because me and you are the smae when it comes to wishing. we always wish for the same damn thing that will never come true. or at least not now.


  • Iris Doyle
    December 26, 2007
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    of course is speeeeled wrong...ha thats okay


  • Iris Doyle
    December 25, 2007
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    what do yu wisshhhhh foor??


  • Iris Doyle
    December 23, 2007
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    love it!! cool idea to wish the same thing every time


  • Clarabelll
    December 23, 2007
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    i like it!!
    Its Cute!! =)


  • eronrox
    December 22, 2007

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    haha. its cute. i've read the beginning before. i know you always make the same wish i've always wanted to know what it is. its short, im positive you have more to say. i love you hannah duffy, you are the best friend anyone could ever ask for.

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