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I hate love poems

  I don't know why I feel this way
  I've never fallen so fast and so hard for someone
  just thinking of your smile give me butterflies
  and staring into your brown eyes makes me melt
  Like butter in a microw wave

I'm trying to send hints but not making it to obvious
I hate playing these stupid games
why can't I just say, "[blots out name] I love you"
and have her say it right back

  This girl has high jacked my brain
  School doesn't seem as important
  As seeing that I got another message from you   
  you have me skip a heart beat,
  loose track of my words,
  && my cool

You brighten my ho-hum life like when
A candle lights a dark room
I just want to gush about you all the time
About the way twirl your lip ring or just how utterly gorgeous . . .
that no words can describe how beautiful you are

Author notes

Did I mention how much I hate love poems?

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  • A falling star
    December 23, 2007

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    awww yay! *squeals excitedly*
    Like everyone else, I like that "This girl has high jacked my brain" part.
    And the rest, of course


  • Scarlet-M
    December 21, 2007

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    "This girl has high jacked my brain"

    " loose track of my words,
    && my cool"

    You are seriously talented.


  • BAMFNx3
    December 21, 2007
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    i read this in journalism!

    its such a sweetass poem
    fo rizzle
    i love it

    <333


  • meagan living
    December 21, 2007
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    AHHH!!!! I LOVE THAT YOU PUT THIS UP
    its amazing !!!!!!!! <3333

    favorite lines:
    This girl has high jacked my brain
    &&
    About the way twirl your lip ring or just how utterly gorgeous