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Mirror

mirror hung
reflections only me
thinking of days better
sunrise calling broken hearts to sing
I am transparent
souls fixed on only love
hopeless

~~~

hopeless
love only on fixed souls
transparent am I
sing to hearts broken calling sunrise
better days of thinking
me only reflections
hung mirror

Author notes

A sad attempt at a Palindrome.

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  • SoulWhispher
    December 21, 2007
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    You have have done a great job here, I reallly liked it, love dad


  • Amera gold member
    December 21, 2007

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    Oh wow! Palindromes are so hard to write and this one is perfect! I love it, both the forward and backward version is on target with wonderful image.

    Love,
    Amera♥