Mama you’re truly a blessing
A gift that is so caressing,
You are there for me from the start
Your love radiates to my heart.
When I’m troubled, can’t stop to weep
In your arms, you put me to sleep,
You fill up my incomplete part
Your love radiates to my heart.
Your voice sings a sweet lullaby
Your beauty dulls the sky so high,
You are the greatest form of art
Your love radiates to my heart.
Mama you’re truly a blessing
Your love radiates to my heart.
Author notes
my mother is my radiant angel...
A Kyrielle Sonnet consists of 14 lines (three rhyming quatrain stanzas and a non-rhyming couplet).
Just like the traditional Kyrielle poem, the Kyrielle Sonnet also has a repeating line or phrase as a
refrain (usually appearing as the last line of each stanza). Each line within the Kyrielle Sonnet
consists of only eight syllables. French poetry forms have a tendency to link back to the beginning
of the poem, so common practice is to use the first and last line of the first quatrain as the ending
couplet. This would also re-enforce the refrain within the poem. Therefore, a good rhyming scheme
for a Kyrielle Sonnet would be:
AabB, ccbB, ddbB, AB -or- AbaB, cbcB, dbdB, AB.
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Beautiful Sonnet...............
This was a pleasure to read almost lyrical put music to this an it would be a great song!!!~~Toni~~ -
Lovely piece of art! It radiates my heart!! The rhyme tended to be a little bit forced here and there, but other than that, it was lovely! And I'm sure your Mother will absolutely adore it! Great job! && Good luck in my contest!!
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Well done. I like it a lot keep up the great work.
Amber
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This is a very heartwarming piece of poetry. You really speak from the heart and that makes this special. As a mother myself, I can tell you that any mother would love to read this from their child. great job.
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Awwww...this is sweet. Mother's are so great! ***Pam***
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Wonderful!
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