I couldn't beleive it
When they told me
No that couldn't be
It couldn't be true
She was there a day ago
Laughing and talking with me
But their faces
They told me
It was no joke
She was gone
Gone forever,never to return
Ohhhhhhhh
It was as if
A grey hand had gone
over me
I could not feel
I could just not get it
How could she go away from me?
She had to be there
With me
How could I live without her?
How could I live a life
When she was not there
And now
When a year has passed
Thoughts about her haunt me
And they will
FOREVER!
A contest entry
- For Ages 12 and Under ONLY --- Just let it flow.... by Amunet Wolfbane.
380 points, ended January 15, 2008, 3 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - 13 and under ages enter your best prewrite Judged by RedwingSpirit.
500 points, ended January 13, 2008, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - *Ages 15 and Under* Broken Floorboards. by Fallen Under Light.
300 points, ended May 3, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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nice list of awards!cool!
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broken floorboards
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Good poem but I'm afraid it won't do for my contest. I don't want sad stuff, as I clearly state in the rules. Sorry.
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Excellent work with this poem
Thank you for taking the time to enter this into my contest.
I wish you the best of luck
RedwingSpirit
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um this is a sad poem with sorrow
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Very well done. Your emotions are strong and you can feel the grief. Great job.
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