The wind is howling
The trees are doing a dance
The water from the ground to the clouds
Are singing their romance
The sky is a burst of shades and hues
My tears flowing freely,
A sunset I couldn’t share with you.
A contest entry
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475 points, ended August 17, 2008, 52 entries
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Gorgeous. Simply put.
Thanks for entering. Good luck to you. -
This was truly a beautiful write
filled with emotions & deeply touching.
The end really got to me.. was so sad but so beautiful at the same time
"The sky is a burst of shades and hues
My tears flowing freely,
A sunset I couldn’t share with you."
Loved it!!
Thank you for entering & best of luck
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Aww this was beautiful!
Love the imagery, depth & emotion.
You really did a great job.
Good luck in the contest!
~ xCandieKissesx -
The sky is a burst of shades and hues
My tears flowing freely,
A sunset I couldn’t share with you.
Wow..what a sunset you have shared with us..I love your immagery and can relate the pain with you..you are wonderful poet..well done...
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Really good!
The imagery is nice and it flows well.
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