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The Firm Drunk

With a bottle in one hand
And the other one clasped
Into a fist, he walked.

Stomping in the corridor
Past the beautiful girl
Who liked herself too well.

Sang songs her father knew
About floods of blood-
Calling them all names.

Hers based on one thing. Football
He half slurred insults
More on derby days.

Football was their religion-
She only went to midnight mass,
He quoted the bible wrongly.

He made his way
Past the man who lusted for her
She flirted, but would not give in.

A bottle in one hand
The other one clasped-
Fist her father knew.

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  • -amykins-
    December 21, 2007

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    Powerful but simple. Concrete imagery, and very very British I really liked it, great job xx