The comfort I feel in your arms
will last my whole life through
your tender touch and sure embrace
speaks of a love so true.
No words between us are needed
as our eyes speak in softest hues
this peace I feel when you're around
bring tears like morning dew.
The safety of your spirit
reaches out in silent caress
I can't begin to tell you
of how I feel so blessed.
You're the one I have been waiting for
for such a long, long time
I never want you far away
as forever you'll be mine.
Author notes
10. Comfort In Your Arms
A contest entry
- Titles, Titles and More Titles!!! by HeavensNewestAngel.
425 points, ended January 5, 2008, 23 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Gorgeous hun, you make me want to find that comfort for myself... beautiful hun, goodluck in the contest
Karen
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Precious!!
Love the message and emotions You have brought forward from Your words
Beautiful images to tug at the heartstrings!!
Love this!!
Beyond Sweet
Thank You for sharing Your Talent!
Many blessings to You in the contest Sweet One!
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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This is a great poem, filled with so much love. Thank you for putting yout title number in your authors comment. Best of luck in the contest
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this is just a beautiful write which holds so much within your words. well done gran and best of luck
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Lovely!!!!!!
Gaylene,
This is an extremely precious write.
Words spoken from the heart.
Outstanding take on the prompt. the entire piece is so lovely....the last two stanzas jumps out as a song to one's heart
"The safety of your spirit
reaches out in silent caress
I can't begin to tell you
of how I feel so blessed.
You're the one I have been waiting for
for such a long, long time
I never want you far away
as forever you'll be mine."
I wish you the very best in the contest!
Many blessing,
Happy holidays,
~David~
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