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Confused

Sometimes I get so lost
Without anyone here
I never understood the cost
Of my heart in your hands

Now I'm always alone
But I want to be
I'm just waiting here
For you to find me

You never said goodbye
And I'm still asking why
You didn't even see me
As I began to leave

But one of these days
I'll see you again
We might dance our dance
And maybe then I'll understand

You'll say "Hello"
And I'll ask "Why?"
You say "Let's dance!"
And I'll say goodbye

  I hope...

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Just the confusion that I'm facing on my way home for the first time in a long time... help...

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    December 21, 2007

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    You'll say "Hello"
    And I'll ask "Why?"
    You say "Let's dance!"
    And I'll say goodbye

    I hope...

    Your last line is very peculiar..I do hope something different..you will perhaps not say..goodbye..you may dance..this is the tradtion of the heart..If I am not wrong..well done...


    • AngeTombe
      March 17, 2008
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      We danced... and I'm glad that we did. It's been a while since I let my heart take a leap of faith but love is the result of the heart taking a leap before your brain and soul can respond...