Our love is like a river
A never-ending stream
That runs as far as the eye can see
Our hearts have combined
As one from the beginning
Ever since I met you
I knew that you and I
Would have a never-ending love
I can look into your eyes
And see a future
Of pure love and happiness
Dreams coming true
Each day that we are together
From the beginning
Our love for me
Has been a dream come true
A contest entry
- Tear Drops On My Guitar by Blooming Poet.
300 points, ended January 11, 2008, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - L.O.V.E!!!! by Condemd RyeZing.
555 points, ended February 27, 2008, 28 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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The emotions flow through this poem painting a masterpiece. How lovely...I wish you the best.
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It's a beautiful piece. The river metaphor is amazing. good write. thanks for entering.
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Dream come true, sounds like it. i love the comparision of love to a river, beautifully penned.
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this is such a beautiful write that just painted a dream in my mind. well done and keep penning this is beautiful
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Love so sweet...ah sis this is beautiful 'n the background goes well with it!
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what a beautiful dream come true~ love this poem, sweet and loving ~blessings always~ momma
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This is so beautiful and I can feel the love in it. And let me guess another pretty background by you, Sis. Much love.
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gorguse! beautiful!
i love you sis -
Wow, I just wish I could live an intense love just like yours. More like I loved the way you developed it, from the beginning to the end.
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