Sh..
Don't speak
just hold me closer
Until the sun forgets to shine
as your glow puts dawn to shame
Your arms are mine to tame
When kisses are like clover
showering the soul
with blessings of perfection
smooth as silk all over
The moment we realize no one can break it
we're written in the constellations
a star sewn secret
So you take my hand
and even if no one knows
we are naked
basking in the shade
Wrapped in wings that heaven made
no fear of bashful seconds
for you treat me like a rose
as cheeks drown red beneath your touch
I crinkle up my nose
Petals shaken and blooming
to meet with two named lips
the essence of spring mornings
threaded in your kiss
the same way you seal it
my precious fate
The same way you catch me
with whispers, with silence
before it's too late
we dance in a sand storm
catching the grains in our hands
knowing that neither is falling
as long as the other one stands
Sh..don't speak
your breathless whispers
Lay until the sun forgets to shine
watch me while I'm sleeping, dreaming
dreams that made me live to make you mine
Author notes
PROMTS: ALL OF THE BELOW
#2 - Being the protected
#3 - Do you have a guardian angel?
#4 - It's A Wonderful Life.
#8 - Miracles
#9 - Finding shelter & comfort through your friends and family.
#10 - Picture inspired
---- My boyfriend is my Guardian Angel. He always gives me the hope I need to keep going and he keeps faith in me while still being honest & even when I think he's being too realistic, he does it to protect me.
A contest entry
- 116th Contest by Tarja.
450 points, ended December 24, 2007, 12 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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"The moment we realize no one can break it
we're written in the constellations
a star sewn secret
So you take my hand
and even if no one knows
we are naked
basking in the shade
Wrapped in wings that heaven made"
very beautiful lovelly! ur still so amazing, its appreciated, ur wonderful writing that is.
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Wow... okay I have fallen in love with this poem and I'll tell you why. First off, I love the format and the style you chose. It looks random and like free verse but it has a structure and everything. Wonderful word choice and great rhyming. Secondly the way you've written this out, it honestly felt like your words were those spoken in the picture. You have literally brought the would be dialog of this beautiful picture to life. And I just am astounded by that. Thank you so much for entering this very soothing piece. And for combining many of the options, Good luck.
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absolutly wonderfull my dear, congrats on creating such a worthy write, thanks for sharing
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