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Poets

We are poets,
We have some words,
They are our pets,
They sing like birds.

Books are our garden,
And the pen a magician-
Which brings out the illusion,
From our romantic den.

We touch the soul,
Of all who dreams.
We cool the burning coal,
Of the inner screams.

We have no death,
For we live in your heart.
We bring romance,
In this world's art,
For we are the fragrance,
Of your silent breath.

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  • I liked your second from last line, about the fragrance of life. That was a special line to me, I am a fan of frangrances and perfumes. Love them. Although allergic to most.
    Thank you for entering.
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    Sophie


  • rejitha
    April 16, 2008

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    Good

    Vibiesh I loved your poem about poets
    It had a very good feel in it and a very good flow too
    I enjoyed it ( excelent ) keep writing


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    December 21, 2007

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    Awesome work here and so true!
    I really enjoyed reading this piece
    by you. Great metaphors and imagery
    throughout it. Thanks a lot for
    sharing it here!




    Jeremy0826


    • vibiesh
      December 22, 2007
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      G thanks Sir
      With Love
      Vibiesh

      • Jeremy0826 silver member
        December 22, 2007
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        You are very welcome, it's my pleasure!
        Take care!


        Jeremy0826

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