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your perfect lover




I want to be perfect for you another time
I want to let you pretend
that you've found your perfect lover
when I'm stubborn in the crowd
and she's glowing and optimistic,
perfect for you.

I grow depressed as I watch
you fall harder for someone that's not me.

but there'll come a day when we're no longer together
and we're in the same room;
you'll see me, smiley and optimistic,
and you'll fall in love again with me this time
while she watches by your side,
stubborn and depressed.







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  • GypsyEyes
    December 21, 2007

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    Wonderful emotion in this. Love the feelings you shared in this write. Nice flow. Totally get what you're saying. Good job! This works so well with my own emotions.