Moments like these
struggles heartbreak
slow falling tears
everyday confusion sets heavy
till my chest hurts
life a giant storm
Then i hear a distant voice
calling my name
I run faster to reach him
he stills my soul
washes my tears
places tender kiss to my pain
Telling me the world is right again
He draws me into his love
wraps gentle wings around comfort abides
My guardian angel ...
this love seeks you out
Let me in
let me out
but never let me go
Author notes
For my future one day
A contest entry
- 116th Contest by Tarja.
450 points, ended December 24, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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this was a great work and would be great for that feb 14 thing.
love the rev papa -
Beautiful
This is such a beautiful write expecially with the picture. I truly enjoyed this thought provoking write. Felt romantic and spiritual to me. Thank you for sharing your poetry with me.
stavykm
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Beautiful words of love and caring...I like the ending the best "let me in...let me out...but never let me go...wonderful..just lovely, thanks for sharing
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Amazing
I think you did an amazing ob on this poem...i think it states exactly how a lot of people do when they fins someone that they love....i know it fits me perfectly!
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This was so romantic.
What a beautiful way to express the way this angel of yours makes you feel... thank you for entering this wonderful piece and good luck.
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this is such sweet write of your feelings, as your guardian angel stills your soul. very nicely done. success in the contest.
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