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Sorry, My Angel

Yesteday I thought of you
And tears filled my eyes
I thought I was happy
But the feelings in me died
I don't know how this happened
I thought you were the one
I'm sorry my angel
For this battle is not done
My broken heart is bleeding
I'm sorry my angel
But you know your not succeeding
Nothing is going right
Everything had been wrong
For I took the wrong turn
And now to hell I belong
I'm sorry my angel
For your disappointed in me
Maybe time will make this right
But for now we'll let it be

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  • SoxxDisastrous
    December 22, 2007

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    This is a really great poem. The rhyming is well done, and the flow is very good. A beautiful poem!


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    December 21, 2007
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    For your disappointed in me
    Maybe time will make this right
    But for now we'll let it be


    Sigh...this is the dark side of the life..where one can see the love in the tearful way..I can see the cry in the every word of this work..Indeed beautiful yet.,.heartfelt write is here..well done...