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My Future


Everything depends on this
The Words I write must express me.
The Sentences I shape must be eloquent.
The Diction must be in the form of my voice.
[why is this so hard?]

My future relies on college
And admission relies on the essay.
But what do words and sentences mean,
Compared to the being that is me?
[capturing personality is an art]

It seems impossible to take
My soul and put it into words.
You type cheerful on the page,
But it doesn’t compare to the smile
On my face [a real smile is rare]

They say a picture’s worth a
THOUSAND words and they are
So. Right.
The pictures of my personality are many,
But to sum them up in an essay
[inconceivable]

Author notes

writing essays is a difficult task

GAHHH

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  • Mr Majenta gold member
    December 25, 2007
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    i promise you'll get a little work done

    can i come over too?


    • draagyn
      December 27, 2007
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      definitely.. but you don't hasten the process... lol. I got half done!!


  • ShInE45DoWn
    December 21, 2007
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    Ah, darling. So true.
    I'll come over and help if you want!
    *kisses*

    • draagyn
      December 21, 2007
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      *hugs*

      Yes, come over!! lol. but I'm aiming to get it done by monday so I don't know how realistic that is... but i don't care about real! lol. miss ya


  • thisxisxme
    December 20, 2007
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    omg kayla i love you! i love this! wow... this.. this is great! holy cow!!


    • draagyn
      December 21, 2007
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      lol. love you too lee. you rhymed to me in your message.. hehe

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