why do things have to change?
they were so good before it all
now everything between us seems so feigned
now we argue, now we fall
life is such a drag sometimes
i don't know what to think
i look at all the signs
but i can't read then cause i blink
what is going to happen
what is going to occur
when once we were a-laughin'
those times are now a blur
life goes oh so fast
what did it all go?
what we had is now so past
it is way down below.
i see the road ahead of us
how it is split away
please don't make a fuss
when i go and you stay
Please tell me what you think
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The rhythm got a little rough toward the end, and you had a few spelling mistakes. Remember, don't change the way things should sound just to make it rhyme cause that makes it weird. I really liked this poem though. The first line starts the poem off nicely and the ending line is a very good wrap up. I think you did a pretty darn good job.
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