You taught me live dreams
he taught me to capture them
with tactic and equations
You lost my heart with a frown
he caught it with a smile
It's all because fate won't tell me secrets
Two slippers.
One Shatters
Cinderella.
he taught me to capture them
with tactic and equations
You lost my heart with a frown
he caught it with a smile
It's all because fate won't tell me secrets
Two slippers.
One Shatters
Cinderella.
Author notes
=[ My best friend/ex bf loves me & I told him I didnt wanna date yet I got a boyfriend & IDK how to tell him because I cant be with him I just dont know how I feel about him so I decided my best friend & I need to take time apart....they both have me tied & IDK where to run....
A contest entry
- BLOW MY MIND! by Tam.
600 points, ended December 30, 2007, 17 entries
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Comments
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oh dear...
this is heart wrenching indeed...
I hope you find peace beautiful spirit!
lovely poem filled with insight...
thank you for sharing your time and talent with me!
Blessings! Tammy

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Love the contrast and beautiful ending. Nice to see that someone caugth you when you fell...lonely feeling to fall alone.
Well done!


