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Two Slippers [One Cinderella]

You taught me live dreams
he taught me to capture them
with tactic and equations

You lost my heart with a frown
he caught it with a smile

It's all because fate won't tell me secrets

Two slippers.
One Shatters
Cinderella.

Author notes

=[ My best friend/ex bf loves me & I told him I didnt wanna date yet I got a boyfriend & IDK how to tell him because I cant be with him I just dont know how I feel about him so I decided my best friend & I need to take time apart....they both have me tied & IDK where to run....

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  • Tam
    December 30, 2007

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    oh dear...

    this is heart wrenching indeed...
    I hope you find peace beautiful spirit!
    lovely poem filled with insight...
    thank you for sharing your time and talent with me!
    Blessings! Tammy


  • mysticstorm gold member
    December 21, 2007

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    Love the contrast and beautiful ending. Nice to see that someone caugth you when you fell...lonely feeling to fall alone.
    Well done!