I lie awake
Thinking of you
Rolling to my side
Holding a pillow
I inhale deeply
Your scent is still there
Caressing my nose
I remember each and every caress, every touch
I hold my pillow tighter
Thinking of you
I imagine you're there
So I can finally sleep
Finally dream of you
My dearest love
My soulmate
I dream I'm making love to you
Remembering
Feeling
Devouring
I hunger for you this way every night
Awake, I wait for you alone here in my bed
Asleep, I make love to you every night in my dreams
When I'm thinking of you
You're always there
A contest entry
- the biggest prewrite contest ever by serenity silvermoon.
900 points, ended January 18, 362 entries
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Comments
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Great!
I like this poem!!! I know what this feels like and you do a great job describing it. Nice job! -
I enjoy the sensual undertone here. It gives me thoughts of dreams I have and have had of love long ago...Fantastically penned. ~gypsy~
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Very sweet I like this poem!
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it was brilliant
liked it alot...
you know how to capture the attention of reader and your words were flowing
keep writing
by
the poet of hearts and beautiful words
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This is so beautiful and one that I can totally relate to. Well done and congratulations on the trophy.
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I do this sometimes. It's so comforting to have the smell of someone you adore still lingering on your pillow, somehow it's a little more comforting and yet of course it's upsetting, because they aren't laying right next to you where you want them to be.
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I lie awake
Thinking of you
Rolling to my side
Holding a pillow
I inhale deeply
Your scent is still there
I love this part.
I can relate so well to this part.
thanks for entering,
good luck
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amazing write.. I have felt this way before,
Thank you so much for entering my contest,
And Good Luck!
-♥Amy♥ -
how did u know i was going through this kind of a thing???
amazingly amazing...
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Wow...
In these lines you have described my life these past few months. Its scary how close to home each and every line of this poem hit. An absolutely fantastic write. Bravo.
JS
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I know exactly how this feels!!! Though i dont sleep much anyway i always dream of the one i love most! That would be my amazing girlfriend Chloe!!!! Anywho, i kinda got sidetracked lol. Great job!!!
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Very nice..all those fallen in love go through this including me
Well done! -
wow, this is really well written! plus, i can really relate to it. i like how you say you "hunger for him."
oh, this is really awesome and sweet. let me know if you put this in any contests, because you definitely should!
I loved it,
- Peanut butter fudge (your new poetry fan)
lol! =D <3
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This was fantastic. Such a longing for that "significant other" and to be caught up in their embrace.
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*CLAP*
I love it, great job and im right there beside you feeling the same way.
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Ahhh, very honest feelings So nice to be in love.
I enjoyed your poem,
keep it up
Adriana -
awe lovely
this is love surely.
you're very lucky...I hope he knows he is too!
Tasha
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