I hear the world speak…
I ignore the words,
I hear the tone… and it seems pissed…
Why must I be the one to bring confusion…?
I only am who I am…
no one else…
I bring with me the pain of one who lives for eternity…
I bring not gifts of joy…
call me pain…
call me hate …
I only respond to these titles…
Why do you come to me and demand perfection
when I confess that I only know how to destroy?
You call me ignorant…
I call you the same…
You say im wrong…
I give you the blame…
Why oh why
do you pretend that I am the man in your dreams?
I confess my weaknesses… you ignore me…
but I’m ignorant…
I am not the child of who you may think..
I am my own person… wrong in my existence…
but still you pretend that I am the man in your dreams...
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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You might want to break this up a bit more, and do it in stanzas instead of lines, and then take out all the ...'s Other than that, this has great potential to be a grand poem...
-Danneh<3 -
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thanks how is it now????
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